"The Person I Admire the Most"

On one of my first days at site, I asked to read some of the learners' journals to get an idea of their level of English and what's going on in their heads. A particularly touching entry came from a girl whose assignment was to write about the person she admires the most:

"Of all the people in the world, I admire my grandmother and to me she is my role model. She laughs with peoples and enjoy story. She is wise because she knows how to read and write. She is proud everytime and is polite in words. I admire my granny because she is so smart. When it come cleanness she is number one. I admire my granny very much and she is the only one who support me. I respect my granny because she is respected and too old. She old, but she is a hard worker especially when it is time for ploughing. She is so nice to me and she is patient. I admire my grandmother more than anyone else in the world. She is so special to me. She is kind, smart, and happy all the time. My grandmother is supportive because she support me and my brothers and sister when it comes to school fund and buy for us uniform, even food. She have got no problem when it comes to talk to other people. I love her so much."